[Stylist] question about wording in line of my acrostic poem in progress

[Georgia Cabus]

Hi,

New here but I vote "bow to". It compliments tge word "glory" on my
opinion. Then "laid below" sounds kinda vague for me because it gives me
the tickling of mind-humor... laid can be in different positions oppose to
bow. I don't think anyone can mistake bowing to a laid on your back.

On Wed, Feb 27, 2019, 6:44 PM Jennifer Applegate via Stylist <
stylist at nfbnet.org> wrote:

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> Does "bow to" or "laid below" sound better as in more specific?
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> Word of Father humbly breathed divine life into silent night, kings laid
> below Holy infant with frankincense, gold, and myrrh, shepherds proclaimed
> birth, angels announced "Glory to God in the highest"
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> Emmanuel walked with His sheep through valleys, protected Elisha from large
> army surrounding city with chariots during darkness, showed prophet's
> servant chariots of fire, multitude of  heavenly mightiest
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